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Petition Addressing the Texas Judicial System Requests Support through Dave Foley’s “Dumbass”

Will Hollywood be a Reason for Change in the Injustice against Men and Women Prisoners?

Dave Foley – 19th March 2021 – An upcoming movie depicting the injustice that men and women had to endure in the state penitentiaries in Texas has been inundated with calls from more than 2000 women urging the production company owned by Hollywood actor, producer and director Dave Foley and Adam Sandler, to stick to the real issues behind the Texas Judicial system. A petition was signed by many people that include attorneys, university professors, politicians and family members of the many men and women that are suffering in the state penitentiaries. The idea behind the petition is for the Dave Foley production company and Hollywood to stick to the true story about the injustices happening in the state run prisons. It is said that the state has sent more inmates to prison than during the Soviet Union did during their political uprising.

PREMISE: Adam Sandler writes letters and saves numerous women from the monotony of prison life, and later when he gets into trouble with a drug cartel they return the favor by rescuing him.

SETTING: Contemporary, Gatesville Texas. There are four women’s prisons located in Gatesville. And of course, Texas is famous for putting everyone in prison for a long time for little or no reason. The number of women in Texas prisons has doubled in the last ten years. Why don’t we have the “Adam Sandler” character… sending letters to women in prison and being their friend and trying to help them adjust, giving them hope… and when they get out of prison he picks them up so they don’t have to ride the smelly bus back home… but his pickup truck is a junker, smoking and sputtering … worse than the bus. But his heart is in the right place… He’s the last “chivalrous” man on earth.

It is said in the petition that many of the signatories were left distraught to find that many of the first time offenders for violations such as drug peddling have received disproportionate sentences. While some argue that a lenient sentence like rehabilitation would have proven much more inexpensive and an effective solution in tackling this gross miscarriage of justice. The petition was discovered by the women when the screenplay of the movie was donated to all the 580 prisons run by private organizations funded by the state government. It is much more difficult for women who are given much harsher penalties for a violation such as carrying small amount of drugs like Marijuana which coincidentally is legal in 21 states.

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About Dave Foley’s “Dumbass” Movie

The movie “Dumbass” revolves around the protagonist writing letters to prison inmates to keep their spirits high during their time in prison; only for them to help the main character who gets into trouble with a drug cartel and saving him at the end. The petition urges the production company, Dave Foley and Adam Sandler to take this issue seriously due to the hardships faced by women inside prison rather than making light of the situation for their own profits.

Dave Foley screenplay subject of prison petition

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CONFLICT

I really hate the word ‘setup’, especially when I tell writers everything must be setup in Act I. I hate the word because it can often be misconstrued to mean ‘tell all’. When, in fact, the opposite is true. The word setup should be changed to ‘hint’. Drop hints in Act I. These tidbits of information, like showing a nail clipper for no reason (paid off in Act III), builds audience suspense. Writers often make the mistake of believing they don’t need suspense unless they’re writing a suspense thriller or a genre that involves mystery, but this isn’t true. EVERY genre should contain suspense in its plot. If we don’t wonder what’s going to happen to a character or a situation, then we won’t want to watch the movie. Suspense starts in Act I by dropping hints.

Dave Foley – CREATE SUSPENSE

Here’s where that unique concept can really help the writer. Open the movie with it! Show the aliens landing on the front yard. Grab the reader ASAP! When I said to introduce the hero’s internal conflict first, I didn’t say you couldn’t introduce the unique teaser first, then let us meet the hero. The goal is to grab the reader in the first ten pages and the easiest way to do this is with a teaser or an inciting incident.

Or put another way, the CENTRAL STORY ACTION is John Cusack getting his family to the spaceships before the world ends.

Dave Foley – Will Cusack be able to get his family to the spaceships before the world ends?

And lo and behold, that’s exactly what happens; it’s not only Cusack’s PLAN, but the CENTRAL ACTION of the story, that can be summed up as a CENTRAL QUESTION:

The PLAN is reiterated, in dialogue, when Cusack gets back to his family and tells his ex-wife basically exactly what I just said above: “We’re going to go back to the nutjob with the map so that we can get to those spaceships and get off the planet before it collapses.”

by: Dave Foley – Actor | Writer | Producer, The Kids in the Hall (1988-2021) | The Wrong Guy (1997) | Blast from the Past (1999)