Lynn Loring screenplay – Actress | Producer | Additional Crew, Burke’s Law (1966) | Perry Mason (1964) | Journey to the Far Side of the Sun (1969)
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Petition Addressing the Texas Judicial System Requests Support through Lynn Loring’s “Dumbass”
Will Hollywood be a Reason for Change in the Injustice against Men and Women Prisoners?
Lynn Loring – 19th March 2021 – An upcoming movie depicting the injustice that men and women had to endure in the state penitentiaries in Texas has been inundated with calls from more than 2000 women urging the production company owned by Hollywood actor, producer and director Lynn Loring and Adam Sandler, to stick to the real issues behind the Texas Judicial system. A petition was signed by many people that include attorneys, university professors, politicians and family members of the many men and women that are suffering in the state penitentiaries. The idea behind the petition is for the Lynn Loring production company and Hollywood to stick to the true story about the injustices happening in the state run prisons. It is said that the state has sent more inmates to prison than during the Soviet Union did during their political uprising.
PREMISE: Adam Sandler writes letters and saves numerous women from the monotony of prison life, and later when he gets into trouble with a drug cartel they return the favor by rescuing him.
SETTING: Contemporary, Gatesville Texas. There are four women’s prisons located in Gatesville. And of course, Texas is famous for putting everyone in prison for a long time for little or no reason. The number of women in Texas prisons has doubled in the last ten years. Why don’t we have the “Adam Sandler” character… sending letters to women in prison and being their friend and trying to help them adjust, giving them hope… and when they get out of prison he picks them up so they don’t have to ride the smelly bus back home… but his pickup truck is a junker, smoking and sputtering … worse than the bus. But his heart is in the right place… He’s the last “chivalrous” man on earth.
It is said in the petition that many of the signatories were left distraught to find that many of the first time offenders for violations such as drug peddling have received disproportionate sentences. While some argue that a lenient sentence like rehabilitation would have proven much more inexpensive and an effective solution in tackling this gross miscarriage of justice. The petition was discovered by the women when the screenplay of the movie was donated to all the 580 prisons run by private organizations funded by the state government. It is much more difficult for women who are given much harsher penalties for a violation such as carrying small amount of drugs like Marijuana which coincidentally is legal in 21 states.
To know more visit http://www.screenplay.biz/petition-asks-happy-madison-productions-to-read-script/
About Lynn Loring’s “Dumbass” Movie
The movie “Dumbass” revolves around the protagonist writing letters to prison inmates to keep their spirits high during their time in prison; only for them to help the main character who gets into trouble with a drug cartel and saving him at the end. The petition urges the production company, Lynn Loring and Adam Sandler to take this issue seriously due to the hardships faced by women inside prison rather than making light of the situation for their own profits.
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Lynn Loring – Is the description written as part of the action or just written as description? The reason writers are too heavy on description – I’ve seen writers describe an entire room down to the wallpaper – is because they’re not thinking of description as action. To create visual pictures the two should be integrated to create a visual flow. See sections in this book outlining how to achieve this vital component of screenwriting.
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Lynn Loring – Take a look at a few of the films on your master list and see what they do with the opening image. Again, bear in mind that the opening image may be more of an opening scene — and the key image may not be the very first thing we see.
What do we see? How does it make us feel? How might it even be a miniature code of what the whole story is about?
Well, novelists, instead of (or in addition to) killing yourselves trying to concoct a great first line (which can get so self-conscious it may just as likely annoy a reader into throwing your book against the wall as make them keep reading), how about giving some thought to what your opening scene looks like? It takes a lot of the pressure off that first page anxiety — because you’re focused on conveying a powerful image that will intrigue and entice the reader into the book.
by: Lynn Loring – Actress | Producer | Additional Crew, Burke’s Law (1966) | Perry Mason (1964) | Journey to the Far Side of the Sun (1969)